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Wednesday, 5 June 2019

Myth Writing

Hi, My name is Kora. We have been writing Myths. I chose to write one about 'How rainbows appeared" Here is my story. My favourite part about writing my myth was how the unicorn spewed.
What I found hard was adding description of characters.

My myth writing
How unicorns appeared...
High in the clouds in Neverland there were chocolate fountains, candy cane trees and misty jungles. It had so many animals like short elves that ride beautiful white unicorns in the city at night.

One misty night there was an elf riding a unicorn and the unicorn was running
around and around a building too many times. The unicorn started to feel unwell and spewed up golden shimmering colourful dust. Glowing rainbow they called it. Everyone in the town woke up because it was so bright and everyone admired it. And now, in Neverland that is why there are rainbows everywhere.

!The end!

1 comment:

  1. Kia ora Kora My name is Kayden and I go to Paihia school and I really like your blog post about your myth writing. I like how you have put a lot of detail into your writing and you are good at using your imagination.You are really good at adding detail. What made you think of making this blog post. Next time could you try to keep it on the page so I can read it I can’t wait to read more. If you have time can you please check my at http://pskaydenk.blogspot.com/ thank you bye.

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